Writing Goals

Organization: only one topic per paragraph even if the paragraph is short.

Sentence Fluency: only 50% of my sentences begin with subject verb. Use verbals.

Creative: Use a lot of voice. Also have meanings to characters names.

Monday, April 19, 2010

The weekend party part 1

Over the weekend I went to Luke Mark’s house for the night. We played capture the flag, ghost in the graveyard, and much more exciting activities. When we were playing capture the flag we all saw this mysterious white van with no logo or anything on it. We didn’t think much of it until we saw it again on the same road when we played ghost in the graveyard. I was it and I was laying down on the ground and I saw the van again, except this time it was moving very slowly. I looked at it for a while and then it drove away. We all started to get kind of scared. Later that night we went outside again because Joe Henderson lost his phone. As we went to look for it, Jake Paget noticed the van again for the third time. When we all looked at the mysterious van it stopped right in front Luke’s house. All of a sudden it started to creep forward and then stopped again. All of our hearts were racing. Suddenly the rusty door swung backward and an old man with a big scruffy beard walked out. Jake P, and Joe H both said “What do you want?” The creepy man just kept walking towards us. That’s when Luke and I started to walk backwards at a quick pace. When he ran towards us that’s when we all booked it out of Luke’s driveway.

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